© Copyright Dan Hallagan & Kayenta Publishing, 2013
SERF
Published 7/4/2013
Excerpt
Cornelius vists the arena
for the first time
After we had
gathered at the center of
the ring, Squire Fausto
ordered us to sit down.
"Welcome to the meaning
of your new life: to defeat
your enemy in combat and
acquire their power. This
is where we climb. You
are unbonded serfs.
This means you are
worthless. I do not
care if you exist or if
you do not exist. Your life is meaningless-except when you
do battle. You will know no greater glory than to raise your
arms in victory within this ring or within the boundaries of any
arena throughout Manningham, the northern continent, or
any province on Wroth. A year from now, when you are
bonded to Duke Aldo, your
every thought, your every
dream should be to
triumph in the arena."
"What is that
platform, Squire?" I
asked, pointing at the side
of the ring not enclosed
by rope.
The squire clearly
loved everything about
the arena because he
answered without his
usual hostility. "Viscounts,
barons, earls, or the duke,
if he graces our arena
with his presence, do not
sit with the common scum
on the grass; they have
comfortable seats on the
platform in a place of
honor. In addition,
weapons are made
available to Climbers of
every rank along the wall of the platform for use in the arena.
In a few moments when the sun clears the top of Spectator
Hill," Fausto gave a name to the C-shaped grassy bowl, "you
will see a weapons display like no other."
"Why is the dirt black?" asked one of the serfs.
Squire Fausto sprinted towards the serf who asked
the question and gave him a mighty kick, launching him like
a football towards distant goal posts. The serf let out a
scream as he flipped, end-over-end, through the air, bounced
down once, then twice before rolling to a stop.
"You will address me as Squire or Sir!" He stomped
back to his original position. "The dirt is black," he explained
calmly, having entirely forgotten about the guy he had just
kicked twenty yards, "because that's not dirt. That is blood-
soaked dirt."
PEASANT
Published 9/11/2013
Excerpt
The Earl’s behavior
disturbs Santa Alessandra
"You monster!"
Santa Alessandra's voice
rang out shortly after the
earl's words had died
away.
"Excuse me?"
asked Cornelius from his
hammock chair.
"You just dropped
him?"
The earl
appeared confused.
"Yes. And?"
"You're a murderer!"
"What?"
The senior power quieted her fiery light display. "Why
did you have to kill that Climber?"
"First of all, Excellency, I didn't kill him. He came back
as a serf somewhere.
Second, he tried to 'kill'
me. Third, what was I
going to do with him?"
"What do you
mean?"
"Was I to let him
back into the command
area where he could
encourage the other
peasants to overpower
me? Would we not be
hiking up to the surface
over all those narrow
paths with endless drops
gaping to one side,
certainly an irresistible
temptation to finish the
job, yes? Did I want him
talking with the baron?
No. I wanted to send a
message to the peasants
in command and a
stronger message to the
baron. And I did. The baron was suitably apologetic for the
misunderstanding. Very apologetic."
"You kept your arrangement? You still betrayed the
viscount?"
With a grunt, Earl Cornelius pushed himself to his
feet. "Your Excellency, I hope you won't take offense, but you
really need to bring a Climber perspective to this story. What
an intriguing game of chess! The viscount suspects the
baron, the baron is concerned about me, I want revenge on
the viscount-all these plots boiling and churning. Stop
obsessing about the morality of it all."
"Don't tell me what to do!"
"I would never tell you what to do, Your Excellency.
I'm just concerned for your mental health. There is no
morality on Wroth."
"Yes there is. You just don't know about it."
"You are right, Excellency. Power. Morality is power."
"No! You have no idea what you are talking about."
She sat down with authority. "Go on with your ugly story."
"As you say, Excellency."
What is the goal of the Climber Series?
This Climber Series falls within the young adult genre,
and is specifically written to appeal to male teenagers
(although, like the Hunger Games or Harry Potter, it is
accessible to all ages). Serf is the first of nine books in a
series that provides an interesting twist on the question
of hell and damnation - a retelling of CS Lewis’s The
Great Divorce - but is as far from boring theology as you
can get. Intellectual and spiritual vegetables for your
teenager disguised as French fries. The setting of this
retelling of Lewis’s classic tale is unusual and fantastic in
the extreme, populated by monsters or aliens (depends
on your perspective, I guess!) - exactly what boys like!